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I
I am I
I is I
You are not I
For thyself can only be I
I am I, you are your own I
There cannot be two I's.
There's only one you and one I.
There is 11 between U and I.
I am ironic.
For there is only one I.
There fore one I, only one I.
I am different.
You are all yous.
I am the one I.
I stand out.
Are we not all only I's?
Except in parallel universes.
We are I's to ourselves.
And the world is a You.
I am insane
I am I.
You are You.
You are an I as well.
We are one.
Flowers for Algernon pg 73 word 12.

I.

It seemed weird at first, but all of this poured out of me.
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Matthordika Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Hm, nice. Couldn't help but remind me of I am the Walrus.
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music-child824 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009
I love that song :)
well the last couple of lines did sort of go with i am the walrus
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Matthordika Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
As soon as I read it I thought of "I am he as you are he as you are me and we are all together."

But its a good poem you got there. As a writer myself, I always love seeing people take interest in the art.
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music-child824 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2009
Well what i basically did was open up my book to a random page and wrote about the first word i read.
Which my luck, was I. :)
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Matthordika Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You hold on to that, as I can't write off the top of my head. Jokes, yeah. Drawings, sometimes. But good poems? Never. I only get what I've got after messing around with ideas in my head.
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music-child824 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2009
Well I had to think about it for a while,
and really my poems aren't too good. :/
I like drawing too, usually they're song based though.
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Matthordika Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
You should keep at it, I know would. Er, am. Thy have much potenial. Build on it.
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